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Congratulation! 'Wave' Story Contest


Tahniah! Penceritaan Yang Menarik & Padu 


Pemenang
Lesther Gnus : Duen Long(Wave) was the son of Fire Sword of the South, Duen Sui and once good friends with Wind. He is the ultimate betrayer, advantage seeker and after eating two pieces of the 7 broken parts of the Dragon Sphere, he became the most powerful villain that Wind and Cloud faced.
Childhood
After his father's duel with Wind's father went awfully wrong, he and Wind both fell into the river and rescued by Hung Ba. Duen Long and Wind grew up in Hung Ba's Tin Ha Wui but due to Mud Buddha's prophesy, Hung Ba only set sights on Wind and did not highly regard Duen Long.
Teenage years
When Hung Ba organized a competition to choose the 3 leaders of the houses of Frost, Cloud, and Wind (the main sections within Tin Ha Wui), Duen Long was due to fight Cloud for the leader's position of the house of Cloud. The day before, Hung Ba approached Duen Long and commanded him to lose to Cloud on purpose. Confused and angry, Duen Long lost his focus on the actual duel and lost the fight to Cloud. Since that day, Duen Long became jealous of Cloud and always wanted to surpass Cloud.
Adult years
Duen Long is a prodominate character in Storm Rider, and has played the role of the traitorous turn-coat numerous times. Duen Long's weapon is the Fire Kirin sword a thin red/orange blade with a jade green guard and handle. After a series of events, Duen Long's sword is eventually shattered, and his honor as a swordsman along with it.
The Second Kirin Demon
After the loss of his Fire Kirin sword as well as being humiliated as a swordsman throughout the series, Duen Long set out to make things right for himself by absorbing pieces of the Dragon Sphere, known to the world as Dragon Pills. He was able to secure one of the pieces, and gained much power from it. Eventually, the immortal arch-villain Dai Seik Tin would fall victim to Long's new power and it is here that Duen Long absorbed his second Dragon Pill. The consumption of two pills not only upgraded his skills further, but altered his physical appearance as well. He slowly began to resemble the Kirin Dragon Beast his hair became naturally blood red, the shape of his head became slightly narrow, and his right hand evolved into a deadly claw that can generate fire instantly.
Ultimate Showdown
After harboring hatred towards both Wind and Cloud over the years, Duen Long's new power finally allowed him to realize his revenge. He initiated a challenge to both heroes, and lured them into accepting by committing heinous crimes against their family by brutally murdering Wind's mother and Cloud's lover Cho Cho. Wind and Cloud rushed to take out Duen Long, but found themselves outmatched  and it is here that Cloud was killed in action.
Death of the Kirin Demon
Cloud's body was preserved after the fight, and eventually revived after a visit by Shen Yi, the local miracle doctor. After absorbing a medicine that revived and upgraded his body, Cloud became powerful enough to fight Duen Long on an even scale. Wind, who had also received special training from the Warrior of 10 Stances, battled Duen Long alongside Cloud. Unfortunately, the post-mortem medicine had its limits, and Cloud's body could not keep up for long. The two Dragon Pills inside of Duen Long had also intensified his body to the point that it became extremely hard to completely destroy. Not even the combined effort of both Wind and Cloud could put Duen Long down for the count. Near the end of the fight, Wind became critically injured after suffering a blow from Duen Long, and needed the internal energy of Cloud to keep him alive. While Duen Long was injured multiple times from the attacks by Cloud, with most of his body degenerated at this point refused to die. Finally, when Po Kuan transferred his Dragon Pill powers to Cloud to assist him in reviving Wind, Cloud used that power to land a final blow to Duen Long using his Kirin Limb while still keeping Wind alive with his other hand. This resulted with Duen Long obtaining the powers of three Dragon Pills and Nameless noticed that Duen Long was starting to detiorate because of the powers have exceeded his body limit. Nameless then delivered the finishing blow using his Hero Sword to pierce through Duen Long and since his damaged body could not maintain the powers anymore, it exploded, killing Duen Long. 
Offsprings of the Demon
Before the showdown of fate with Wind and Cloud, Duen Long had an affair that resulted in the birth of a set of twins Shen Feng and Lan Wu. Duen Long's sparingly kind traits were apparently passed down to Shen Feng, while hints of his evil ambitions can be seen in Lan Wu. Both were separated as babies: Shen Feng was raised as a good person by Japan's then-number 1 swordsman, Wong Ying, and eventually inherited his skills and blade. Lan Wu was brought to the Infallible Blue Clan and grew up to become its cruel, dominating leader.
Both men later discover the truth about their father. Shen Feng rejected Duen Long, claiming that Wong Ying was the only true father in his mind. Nevertheless, he vowed to correct the wrong doings that Duen Long caused in his lifetime. Meanwhile, Lan Wu chose to fully embrace the legacy of evil his father had left behind. Wu is currently the sole user of the Deity Destroyer stance a set of techniques that Duen Long created after consuming the two Dragon Pills. 

Ulasan Juri : Penceritaan kemas dan padat. Bermula dari kecil sehingga kematian Penduga Arus. Mempunyai penerangan berkaitan Pedang Fire Kirin. Kematian Penjejak Awan dan kehidupan semula. Penjejak Badai dilatih oleh jaguh 10 aliran dan menguasai hikmat  baru.

No.2
Mohd Fandi : 

Nama :  Penduga Arus
Alias : Din Lau
Kerabat : Kumpulan Alam Semesta, Kumpulan Kota Utama, Pintu Angkasa
Senjata: Pedang Api/ Pedang Unikorn Api
Hikmat : Hikmat Pedang Api, Aura Pedang Pemutus Urat, Hikmat Darah Berapi, Aura Syaitan
Guru : Iblis Pedang, Panglima Dewa

Latar Belakang:
Menyertai Pintu Angkasa. Muncul semula dengan komplot untuk menguasai bahagian selatan China yang dikuasai oleh Singa Ganas Rimba Utara, Buddha Senyum Puncak Barat, Kera Sumbang Gunung Timur dan Sang Kancil @ Zhuge Rimba Selatan. Berjaya menundukkan tiga jaguh utama di selatan China itu kecuali Singa Ganas Rimba Utara. Cuba menguasai Perikatan Bhiksu dan Bhiksuni dengan memperalatkan Lawan Tathagata, namun komplotnya dipatahkan oleh Uda Naga dan Hati Murah. Cuba membunuh para hadirin yang menghadiri pertandingan untuk memilih ketua Perikatan Bhiksu dan Bhiksuni, namun kemunculan semula Penjejak Badai yang telah sekian lama mengasingkan diri telah sekali lagi menggagalkan rancangannya.

Bertolak ke bahagian Utara China untuk bekerjasama dengan Kultus Rembulan Biru selepas mendapati bahawa Maharaja Angkasa tidak lagi mempercayai keupayaannya yang telah ditewaskan oleh Penjejak Badai. Namun usul yang dicadangkannya telah ditolak malah dia sendiri telah diburu oleh orang-orang Kultus Rembulan Biru. Turut menyertai operasi membunuh naga yang diketuai oleh Maharaja Angkasa. Cuba melarikan diri bersama pecahan intisari naga yang diperolehinya namun disekat oleh Maharaja Angkasa. Pecahan intisari naga miliknya telah terjatuh ke dalam laut semasa pergelutan dengan Maharaja Angkasa namun dia berjaya melarikan diri. Cuba bekerjasama dengan Po Jun untuk merampas pecahan intisari naga yang dimiliki oleh Bayang Raja, namun telah diserang secara mendadak oleh Po Jun yang enggan berkongsi pecahan intisari naga yang ingin dirampasnya daripada Bayang Raja.

Diselamatkan sekali lagi oleh Penjejak Badai semasa Zhuge @ Sang Kancil Rimba Selatan cuba membunuhnya yang berada dalam keadaan amat lemah. Cuba mengambil kesempatan untuk merampas pecahan intisari naga milik Penjejak Badai yang sedang merawat kecederaan Penjejak Awan selepas pertarungan mereka dengan Maharaja Angkasa. Hasratnya terbantut apabila menyedari Penjejak Awan telah sedarkan diri.

Memberitahu kepada Maharaja Angkasa tentang kedudukan Penjejak Awan dan Penjejak Badai selepas dia ditangkap oleh Maharaja Angkasa, namun dia sendiri telah ditahan  apabila serbuan yang dibuat oleh Maharaja Angkasa dan orang-orangnya tidak menjumpai Penjejak Awan dan Penjejak Badai. Sekali lagi diselamatkan oleh Penjejak Badai, namun sekali lagi juga dia menjual Penjejak Badai untuk membolehkannya melarikan diri. Diburu oleh Penjejak Awan dan Penjejak Badai disebabkan angkaranya itu sehingga tercetusnya insiden patahnya Pedang Unikorn Api. Dilepaskan oleh Penjejak Badai selepas menyangkakan bahawa dia telah kembali ke jalan yang benar.

Muncul untuk menyelamatkan Awan dan Badai yang bertarung dengan Maharaja Angkasa. Ditugaskan untuk menjaga keselamatan keluarga Awan dan Badai dengan membawa ahli keluarga mereka melarikan diri daripada medan pertarungan. Sebaliknya dia telah menjadikan keluarga Awan dan Badai sebagai tawanan. 

Merampas pecahan intisari naga milik Bayang Raja  yang telah cedera parah selepas pertarungan dengan orang-orang Jinmu Kazuo. Membunuh ibu Penjejak Badai sebelum menyembunyikan diri bagi membolehkannya mengasimilasikan pecahan intisari naga yang ditelannya.

Mengekori Maharaja Angkasa yang telah mengalami kuasa makan diri setelah diperangkap oleh Guruh Badai. Membunuh Maharaja Angkasa dan menelan pecahan intisari naga yang kedua untuk menjadi jaguh terkuat di dunia. Mempermain-mainkan Awan dan Badai. Membunuh Yan Wang, bapa Penjejak Badai dan kemudiannya membunuh  Chu Chu dan anaknya agar Awan dan Badai menyahut cabarannya untuk bertarung di Kumpulan Alam Semesta.

Mencipta satu hikmat yang dinamakan sebagai Hikmat Pemecah Dewata tetapi tidak dapat mempelajarinya kerana cakarnya telah berubah menjadi cakar syaitan setelah memakan dua biji pecahan intisari naga. Menyerahkan panduan hikmat tersebut kepada bapanya, Din Shui agar hikmatnya itu diwariskan kepada anaknya pada kemudian hari. 

Bertarung dengan Awan dan Badai di Kumpulan Alam Semesta. Dibutakan sebelah matanya oleh Tanpa Nama. Dihancurkan lengan kirinya oleh serangan mendadak oleh Penjejak Awan yang menggunakan Kitaran Kedua Pil Anti Alam Semesta. Mengalami beban lebih selepas Penjejak Awan mengalihkan kuasa dalamannya dan kuasa dalaman Po Jun secara tergempar. Berkecai badannya apabila  Tanpa Nama melancarkan tikaman ke badannya yang tersarat dengan kuasa.

Ulasan Juri : Penceritaan kemas. Berkenaan perebutan intisari naga sehingga kemuncak kematian Penduga Arus.
Penduga Arus sebagai Pembelot dan Talam Bermuka muka dalam persahabatan dengan Penjejak Badai. Sanggup lakukan apa saja untuk meningkatkan kuasa dan telah mengorbankan banyak nyawa sahabat terdekat dalam misi untuk mengalahkan Penjejak Badai dan Penjejak Awan.

#longlivefwc

09-01-2021

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